Author Services

Jump straight to the Developmental Beta Reading Request form.

As a hard working, self-published author myself, I fully appreciate that we are all trying to get our best work published without breaking the bank.

I love to support other writers on the same journey as me, and have decided to offer a low cost alternative to Developmental Editing.

Developmental Editing can often cost more than $8 per 1,000 words, which equates to $400 for a fifty thousand word book. That’s a lot of money! Instead, I am happy to offer a Developmental Beta Reading service for only $3 per 1,000 words, which costs only $150 for fifty thousand words.


About me:

As well as publishing myself, I have recently acquired a Master’s Degree in Novel Writing, and possess a First Class Honours (UK) degree,  having previously studied English and Creative Writing. I have critiqued and edited the work of my class mates on both courses, as well as the work of writing buddies for over 5 years. Over the last year, I have provided the beta reading service to thirteen manuscripts ranging from a short story of fifteen thousand words to full-length novels of over a hundred thousand words long.


“I first came to know Victoria DeLuis through her Magic Books Cross Promo group on Facebook. When I learned she was expanding her services to include developmental editing, I jumped at the chance. I quickly discovered her to be personable and professional and exactly what I needed. Victoria not only read through the sludge of drafts I sent her way, she pointed out obvious grammatical errors. Since she was mainly here for the story elements, the extra proof was much appreciated. Not only did she help me catch the right beats in each scene, she wrote up a detailed analysis of the manuscript’s strengths and weaknesses. Authors are often the worst about critiquing our manuscripts because we are too close to the story. While beta readers and critique partners are also essential, I can’t recommend enough using a developmental editor like Victoria. Not only did she give me perspective on the story I thought I was telling but helped unlock the narrative’s full potential. I am officially a fan and plan to use her for future books.” ~ Jennifer Silverwood

If you would like to check out my new service, the details are below:

New Developmental Beta Reading service

**** CURRENT DISCOUNT 50% OFF – $2.00 PER 1,000 WORDS – NORMALLY $3 PER 1,000 WORDS ****

Fiction only, Full or partial manuscripts, including short stories.

Genres:  All genres welcome

Specialities: YA and Adult fantasy, urban fantasy, paranormal romance (any steam level), and paranormal mysteries.

What’s included:
  • One read through of your manuscript
  • Inline comments with a focus on areas of improvement
  • A summary report detailing ways to improve your manuscript. All aspects will be considered, including characters and motivation, dialogue, plot and conflict, pacing, setting and worldbuilding
  • I will also point out any glaring grammatical errors, but will not actively search for them, as this is not a proof reading service
  • A CONFIDENTIAL service. Your manuscript will only be discussed with  you, and will never be discussed or shared with anyone else.

I will help you figure out what’s working and what’s not and show you where to fix your manuscript.

  • Copy editing, proofreading, grammar, and sentence structure
  • In depth developmental editing. this is not a detailed developmental edit. I am happy to clarify my comments but they are open to your interpretation.
  • I will not fat check for dates, historical, or scientific accuracy etc.
Time slot

The amount of time it takes to beta read your manuscript will depend on length. I will aim to complete jobs within 2 weeks.

Price and Payment
  • $3 per 1,000 words
  • All payments are to be made via Paypal
  • A 50% deposit will be due before work starts
  • Remaining balance due on completion


  • I will work to strict ethical standards
  • Your work belongs to you. I will never share you work with anyone. All emails containing your manuscript and the manuscript itself will be deleted two weeks after the end of the project.
  • Under no circumstances will I redistribute, copy, share, or make publish any material you present to me.
To access service:
  • Please complete the Developmental Beta Reading Request form.
  • I will contact you within 48 hours to confirm availability, duration required, and price
  • When details have been confirmed and agreed upon. I will send you a Paypal invoice for 50% of the agreed fee. When this payment has been received, you can send me your manuscript and I will return it within the specified timescale.
  • Once the manuscript has been returned with comments. I will send a Paypal invoice for the remaining costs. Please ensure this is paid within two weeks of receipt.
Any more questions?

If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me via the contact form below.

I look forward to working for you!




Cross promotions

Please  join the author Facebook group to keep up to date with current promotions by authors in our genres!

Please read carefully, hopefully I will cover everything you need to know.

Magical Book Deals currently promotes the following genres:

    • Myths and Legends
    • Paranormal Fantasy
    • Paranormal Mysteries (Cosy or otherwise)
    • Urban Fantasy
    • Paranormal Romance

If your book fits into any of these genres, and you have a new release, I can place your book on the new release page. Please complete the following forms:



If you would like a feature, please complete the following form and include a 600 word snippet:


In addition, I will be running focused promotions.

I will update this page with current promotions and sign-up form links. Please select the promotion most appropriate for your books.

Click the links for the promotions you would like to for. If there is no link available or no link suitable for your book, then please check back at a later date.


UF and PNR Bargain Book Promotion – 30th March – 5th April – Books must be between 99c and $2.99 (no participation fee)

Supernatural/Paranormal Mysteries Bargain Book Promotion – 6th – 20th April – Books must be between 99c and $2.99 (no participation fee)

Mega Multi-Genre Book Promotion – 27th – 30th April – $5 participation fee (this is a rare cost and future promotions will still be free to enter)

There is no cost to participate in these promotions, however you must be willing to post to your mailing list and/or promote through your social media outlets.

Please note however, that although I am not charging for these promotions,  I do use Amazon Associates links.

This is a new site and as such site promotion specific subscribers are currently minimal, but growing. However, I will always promote to my author mailing list of just over 6k, as well as on my other social media outlets. If your book is included in a promotion, please do the same.

To be included in the promotions or detailed on the site, please be advised:

  • Books must be well presented with a nice cover and good blurb.
  • No minimum reviews or star rating required.
  • Please enter a different book with each promotion. Do not repeat books!
  • We reserve the right to refuse books that are not suitable and/or contain content outside of the required parameters.

Hopefully, this answers any questions you may have, but please feel free to contact me on the email address detailed above should you have any queries.